Today, we decided to show our 1 minute of footage to our primary audience we did this so that as wee continue to film we can establish what is working and what we need to rethink within our music video.
Positive Feedback
- Good editing on the beat
- Black and white shots are good
Things to think about/change
- Shot of tumbling weir to the church was unclear in regards to the narrative
- Introduce colour
- More shots of our protagonist
- Re film some shots
Because of this we have decided to re-film some of our shots as well as look at our narrative again and tye over any lose ends in hope that our narrative will make more sense to our audience. We also told our audience that we plan to make some of the shots stay in colour to contrast the rest of the music video to show happier times for our protagonist. We hope that this will also help in explaining our narrative in more depth and to help our primary and secondary audiences understand the narrative further. By doing this and changing our music video accordingly we hope to make our music video to appeal to a wider auidience.
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