Audience Feedback

After presenting our pitch we were given feedback from our peers in which we were able to use to make change our ideas and make them more realistic and achievable. This was our feedback.

Positives

• Locations appeal to peers 
• Artistic elements 
• Editing on the beat shots 

Things to look at 

• Work on narrative 
• Too girly, does not appear to a wide audience
• Think about colour

From this feedback we were then able to think about these different aspects of our pitch and correct our faults. First of all we looked at our narrative and altered it so that it was more structured and was easier to follow. We then thought about colour as we had mentioned making the entire music video black and white, we have now decided to make all of the flashbacks black and white so that the rest is in colour .